It seems like introducing the computer into the chain is adding the noise. Computer sound jacks are not usually high-quality. The buzz may be from the computer jack itself. I don't know if a ground loop isolator can fix that--maybe someone with more knowledge does. In my very limited experience, grounding problems tend to hum, not buzz.
Also, as before, you are getting much higher output from the TFB-2--just look at the height of the waveform. When you lower the volume in the first part, the buzz goes down too. I wonder how it would sound if you amplified the quieter parts from the internal mics to the same volume. (There's an Amplify function in Audacity.)
Your setup should be mics--Mic-In--Sony Line Out--Computer Line-in. (Are you sure your computer has a line-in? and not a mic-in, which has its own preamplifier adding more noise to the signal). When you plug the mic into the Sony mic jack, the Sony will ask you if you want plug-in power--you do.
You are recording very quiet sounds and really cranking them up, which is going to bring out any noise anywhere along the signal path. You'd have to spend thousands of dollars more for ultra-low-noise (no one ever promises noiseless). In the real world, are you going to be using the mics to record such super-quiet sounds?