looks good, firmdragon! man, you only 2-3 hours a day for 4 days? you're getting off lucky. lol
i'm in the middle of a 2-cam project and i've spent approximately 20 hours on mixixng the first 45 minutes. now i just have to do the other 45 minutes and then encode.
on the constructive criticism side, it looks like that video was from a handheld source... if you're so inclined, you can actually get plugins that reduce the shakiness of the video sources. (i've been doing that in the shaky spots for the handheld cam in my current project). it requires more rendering time, but in the end, it's worth it.
also, i personally haven't messed with Vegas - not yet anyway - but is there a Levels filter in Vegas? it's worth checking out, as doing a simple adjustment on the RGB levels can work wonders for the overall appearance of the video (especially in low lit concert settings).
rock on.