I didn't spent much time on the phase alignment of the mix, so your mix did better there. When checking, look between 3khz and 11khz. If it sounds sort of crunchy, then compare the sources individually. A misalignment may make it worse, or you may just be hearing something wrong in one of the sources.
What I did differently was:
- Shelve about 3db out of the sub 400hz region on the aud (cause the sbd has bass and it's cleaner).
- Boost 2db in the sbd between 600hz and 1500hz (to try and bring out the pop of the drum).
- Drop 2db off of the aud in general. (I like a slightly drier mix is all).
I debated doing a LPF above 4khz and then boosting the same region in the aud to resolve any phase alignment issues there but didn't bother.
A lot of this is nitpicking while I was waiting for laundry to finish. I could take yours and shelve some of the bass out of it and be happy.