OK, I stuffed the parts into the collette.
I'm getting a good signal out, no hum, but I'm getting some annoying "rushing" or "wind" type noises. I think those are problems due to small currents, eg., solder flux, etc.
I have to get more serious about cleaning the parts and putting conformal coating on them. I've also redesigned the circuit to reduce the # of parts inside the collette.
So, this is going to take some messing around. I'm sure I can get it working, but it is not so easy as I thought...
Richard